ext_1148 ([identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bananacosmicgirl 2008-06-13 12:44 pm (UTC)

Very nice story. I like Tony not being able to tell reality from vodka!fantasy. Of course he would be upset with the whole situation.

One thing that I noticed was that you never use contractions. Makes the fic seem a bit too formal-unless that's what you were going for. ;)

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