just caught up on the last two chapters and i'm sniffling. if there's one thing i hate, it's stories that don't capture you and leave you leaning towards the screen or gripping the book tighter. you want to flip to the next page and keep reading because if you don't then your brain might short circuit. that's what i got here. you can feel the emotion in the words and it makes your own heart beat that much faster. i keep staring at the link for chapter 16, willing it to light up and take me to the next page lol.
brilliant job luv! the writing is spot on and you haven't faded. once the story is completely up and just waiting for more eager eyes and twitching clicky fingers, i shall be reccing it on the forum i frequent. i hope that's okay.
*twitches and goes to reread and then stare at the link to chapter 16 some more*
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Date: 2009-03-13 11:53 am (UTC)just caught up on the last two chapters and i'm sniffling. if there's one thing i hate, it's stories that don't capture you and leave you leaning towards the screen or gripping the book tighter. you want to flip to the next page and keep reading because if you don't then your brain might short circuit. that's what i got here. you can feel the emotion in the words and it makes your own heart beat that much faster. i keep staring at the link for chapter 16, willing it to light up and take me to the next page lol.
brilliant job luv! the writing is spot on and you haven't faded. once the story is completely up and just waiting for more eager eyes and twitching clicky fingers, i shall be reccing it on the forum i frequent. i hope that's okay.
*twitches and goes to reread and then stare at the link to chapter 16 some more*