*snort* Poor you. Everyone here's all flailing and want to know, and you're holding it over their heads. You're evil. Almost as evil as me *g*
I did add to this chapter (mainly because there were things missing that needed to be in it) - I know I was sitting there thinking, 'well, it's not gonna be betaed, let's hope I'm doing it right anyway' ^^ It helps to have said basement very clear in my mind; from the comments, it seems I've managed to convey it. I'm so happy with the response :)
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Date: 2009-03-13 09:41 pm (UTC)I did add to this chapter (mainly because there were things missing that needed to be in it) - I know I was sitting there thinking, 'well, it's not gonna be betaed, let's hope I'm doing it right anyway' ^^ It helps to have said basement very clear in my mind; from the comments, it seems I've managed to convey it. I'm so happy with the response :)