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Title: Four times Tony woke up in pain (and one time he didn't)

Author: Cosmic
Author's Email: bananacosmicgirl@hotmail.com
Author's Home Page: CosmicUniverse.net
Author's Journal: [livejournal.com profile] bananacosmic

Fandom: NCIS
Parts: 1
Word count: 5x100
Rating: PG
Genre: Hurt/comfort, fluff
Characters: Tony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Pairings: Gibbs/DiNozzo

Warnings: Slash
Spoilers: Up to 6x08 "Cloak"

Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations from the tv-show “NCIS”, created and owned by David P. Bellisarius and CBS. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.

Summary: Tony often wakes up in pain.

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1.
Consciousness comes and goes, and he’d really rather it go, because each breath hurts like fire and ice breaking him apart from the inside. There is nowhere he can go to get away from it. He gasps and coughs, and he tastes blood on his lips and then there are nurses, and doctors, and he can barely see through the hazy pain.

But there is one thing he likes about waking. One single thing – a warm hand, fingers wrapped tightly around Tony’s. Tony can’t find the strength to hold on himself, but he rests assured that Gibbs has his six.


2.
He wakes up in the back of a car. He recognizes the smell: Gibbs’ car. He’s hung onto its rails enough times to know it intimately.

“Morning, DiNozzo,” Gibbs says.

Tony blinks and sits up, or tries to anyway. Gibbs is in the front seat, driving, but much more carefully than he usually does. Tony’s body feels like it’s made of lead.

“Where—”

“HQ,” Gibbs says. “You need rest. Doctor’s orders.”

Tony closes his eyes briefly, and remembers. “They’d be dead if I hadn’t been there.”

Gibbs gazes back at Tony through the rear-view mirror.

“You did good, DiNozzo.”


3.
His head aches, pounding with every heartbeat. Finding himself on hard stone, he rolls over with a grunt. The sky above him is endlessly blue, making the elephants stomp around in his head even harder, because there is nothing to settle his gaze on.

Then Gibbs’ face comes into view, and Tony thinks absently that Gibbs’ eyes are the same color as the sky.

“Lucky you’ve got a thick head, DiNozzo.”

“Mh-hm,” Tony says, unable to get his tongue working amidst the elephants.

Gibbs touches the side of Tony’s face. He’s checking for injuries, but Tony enjoys the touch anyway.


4.
Tony wakes up, body hurting. He tastes the metallic tang of blood and his head is pounding; it’s not a pleasant way to awaken. Then again, he’s been unconscious, not sleeping.

He opens his eyes, finding Gibbs staring down at him. Tony wonders how it’s possible for the man to look concerned and annoyed at once, but Gibbs manages. Then again, Gibbs always manages the impossible.

“Ziva?” Tony asks, because the last thing he remembers is them fighting bad guys.

Gibbs holds his hand out to Tony. Grabbing it, Tony knows bad things have happened – Gibbs never helps this way.


5.
Fingers are running through his hair, threading gently, the motion soothing. The hand is warm and a bit rough and calloused, but Tony doesn’t mind. He lets his senses slowly awaken, enjoying the sensation of sweet touches and taking in the smell – sawdust and coffee, because what else would it be? – of his lover. He doesn’t need sight to know.

When he does open his eyes – slowly, lazily – he finds blue eyes watching him, and he knows that this is how it’s supposed to be. This is the way they are supposed to be.

“Morning,” Gibbs says, and Tony smiles.






The end






Author's note: Episodes:
1. 2x22 “SWAK”
2. 2x23 “Twilight”
3. 4x04 “Faking it”
4. 6x08 “Cloak”
5. Unfortunately, not canon (yet!) :)


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Date: 2008-12-22 06:34 pm (UTC)
ext_14933: (NCIS Gibbs and Tony I got you)
From: [identity profile] anorienparker.livejournal.com
Love them all! Excellent job getting so much said in so few words! :)

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Date: 2008-12-22 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you very much *hug*

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Date: 2008-12-22 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yellowvalley.livejournal.com
Dawwwww. Poor Tony! Although he does get to wake up next to Gibbs in the last one... ;)

I like that you used the canon H/C!Tony episodes. It allows you to say more with less words, which worked here considering he's supposed to be waking up in each.

I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 2008-12-22 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
I think the last one makes it up for him ^^

Glad you enjoyed it. I found it kind of hard to stay within the wordlimit, but after some editing... but yes, it was easier with episodes. There were a few to pick from :)

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Date: 2008-12-22 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabican.livejournal.com
This is really well done! I'm impressed with how you managed to pack in cues about which episode was which without being over the top about it, you know, "GEE WHIZ WAKING UP WITH THE PLAGUE SUCKED," kinda thing. Although now I realize that I can't remember what the heck happened to the poor guy during Faking It.

And of course, the end. :D :D

Thank you!

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Date: 2008-12-22 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you *hug*

Franks hit him over the head in Faking It. I don't like Franks ;p The picture is from Faking It, too.

Glad you enjoyed it :)

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Date: 2008-12-22 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabican.livejournal.com
Oh, that episode! I don't like Franks either. He's a jerk. And honestly, I think they should have shown Gibbs being more conflicted between Franks-loyalty and team-loyalty. I mean, Franks hit Tony over the head while Tony was protecting him! Tony! Like, maybe it would be worse if it were Ducky or Abby, but only barely, yo.

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Date: 2008-12-22 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
I know - he doesn't show any conflict. Tony was doing his job, and got the butt of a gun to his head for it. But honestly, Gibbs rarely seems to care when his agents are hurt...

I generally find Franks to be an asshole. He hasn't really been shown as anything else; every single time he's on the show, he's doing things just for himself, with no regard for anyone else, imo. I also dislike how Franks killing the weapons dealer in "Faking it" isn't shown as conflicted at all - i4t's right for Franks to kill him, "because he'd never go to trial". Right, so all people should just take the law into their own hands.

Over all, I find that to be a reoccuring problem with NCIS, I guess. Threatening to send people to Guantanamo and killing people is fine as long as it's the good guys who's doing it.

...well, that was a bit of a rant. Sorry. ^^

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Date: 2008-12-22 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ferneberga.livejournal.com
Nice and sweet - thanks

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Date: 2008-12-22 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

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Date: 2008-12-22 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com
*Snickers at Unfortunately, not canon (yet!)*
Nice look at some of the different things Tony (and Gibbs) have gone through!

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Date: 2008-12-23 08:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
*g* Well, a girl can always hope... :)
Thank you *hug*

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Date: 2008-12-23 12:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Lovely, thanks.

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Date: 2008-12-23 08:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you *hug*

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Date: 2008-12-23 12:38 am (UTC)
ext_3277: I made this (Default)
From: [identity profile] laura-trekkie.livejournal.com
Poor Tony, he really does seem to end up in pain a lot, so I'm glad he got one instance of pleasurable, pain-free waking.

Laura.

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Date: 2008-12-23 08:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Glad you like it :)

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Date: 2008-12-23 01:05 am (UTC)
spikedluv: (ncis: gibbs&dinozzo - GslashD by moosewi)
From: [personal profile] spikedluv
Those were great! Love Gibbs being there to pick Tony up each time, and especially the last, of course. *g*

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Date: 2008-12-23 09:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you very much *hug* :)

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Date: 2008-12-23 03:12 am (UTC)
ext_15370: Nothing special; just a pixelated rainbow. (Default)
From: [identity profile] awils1.livejournal.com
Excellent; very subtle, and the canon elements worked so well in proving your point: Gibbs looks after Tony.

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Date: 2008-12-23 09:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you very much *hug* Although I do wish they would show him looking after Tony a bit more on screen...

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Date: 2008-12-23 03:26 am (UTC)
ext_3440: (Default)
From: [identity profile] tejas.livejournal.com
*Very* nice!

We seriously need an NCIS Five Things comm.

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Date: 2008-12-23 09:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

I agree. I was looking for one when I was finished with this, but I couldn't find one...

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Date: 2008-12-23 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] justhuman.livejournal.com
Loved these - every one.

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Date: 2008-12-23 09:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

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Date: 2008-12-23 07:03 am (UTC)
dhae_knight_1: My kitten Zasha (Default)
From: [personal profile] dhae_knight_1
Oh. Oh wow. Oh man these are beautiful. You really pack a lot of punch into small packages, you know.

You know... I'm sure #5 is canon. They just haven't show it on-screen... ;-)

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Date: 2008-12-23 09:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed them :)

*g* That's totally true! ^^ Let's call it 'not *on screen* canon yet' then?

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Date: 2008-12-23 08:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abe16kidbosco.livejournal.com
Oh man! I love your fics SO much! So so so so much!!! Amazing as always! Can't wait for more!!! :D

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Date: 2008-12-23 09:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you very much :) More is coming up, I promise!

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Date: 2008-12-23 08:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xanthelj.livejournal.com
Fabulous! I love how you tied in a moment with Gibbs following each of Tony's injuries. I esp liked the Twilight one for some reason - that ep is about the most concern Gibbs shows for one of his agents! Although he is cute with the looking in Tony's eyes thing after Franks knocks him out. Talking of which, I read your comments about Franks and totally agree. I know Gibbs seems to hero worship the guy but I find him hard to like. Plus, he hit Tony! I loved number 5 - and perhaps it's only a matter of time before it IS canon *g*.

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Date: 2008-12-23 09:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you very much :) And yes, I love Twilight for that reason - Gibbs actually, verbally, takes care of Tony. Me likes very much.

I guess Gibbs' hero worship is supposed to mirror the way Tony and the others' hero worship Gibbs, but Gibbs isn't at all like Franks. For example, Gibbs would *never* leave a file open on a desk, so that the father and husband of a murdered daughter and wife would be able to find the culprit and kill him...

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Date: 2008-12-23 09:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puck23.livejournal.com
So good! I enjoyed it. and happy holidays!

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Date: 2008-12-23 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you very much :) And Happy holidays to you too!

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Date: 2008-12-23 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puck23.livejournal.com
Thanks. just wanted to mention that I adore your icon.

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Date: 2008-12-23 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
:) Thank you very much!

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Date: 2008-12-23 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I love these and man do they pack a punch!! I hope you post more soon.

ShadowCat17

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Date: 2008-12-23 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed them :)

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Date: 2009-02-12 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-staci.livejournal.com
This is really amazing, and so sweet. I'm very new to the fandom, and you are one of the authors that got me into these two, and I love all your stuff! This is one of my very favorites, though. *memories* :]

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Date: 2009-02-12 09:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this and the other stuff I've written :) *hugs* If you want more, go check out my recs (http://bananacosmic.livejournal.com/76136.html) - lots of fantastic stuff there.

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Date: 2009-06-18 03:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] murgy31.livejournal.com
I loved these! I just found them... they are great!

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Date: 2009-08-22 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] little-ozzo.livejournal.com
Just recently discovered your fic, and I absolutely love all of it, but don't want to spam your inbox for every single one! So, just to say, I adore this. It's one of my ultimate comfort fics - reading it (usually at work, facing a huge pile of filing or another mind-numbing story from my colleague) makes me feel like I'm at home in my pyjamas with hot chocolate. Excellent hurt/comfort, and the fifth snippet is just lovely.

Thanks!

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Date: 2009-08-22 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
Thank you very much :) Oh, and I don't mind spamming *g* I'm glad you enjoy my fics *hugs*

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